Poetry Friday: _dent_ty Theft
_dent_ty Theft
Love seemed a dream, a warm well of contentment.
She gave herself up to the arms of another
and packed her own dreams far away, sans resentment,
unaware that the sweetest embrace can yet smother.
For she was no doormat! No, merely enchanted.
Bound up by love’s feathery arms, she could fly.
Slowly her own lofty goals were supplanted.
She never asked how; she forgot to ask why.
She never gazed up at the stars to remember;
her eyes shut, she rode a warm current to sea.
She slept, and her soul wasted to a dull ember,
a kernel of self that no more blossomed free.
But one day she woke up, no longer enraptured.
She rubbed her eyes, saw how she’d stumbled awry.
She scrambled for her scattered dreams and recaptured
them, strode to the door, and declared, “I am I.”
This week, Tricia at The Miss Rumphius Effect challenged readers to write a lipogram—a poem that avoids one or more letters of the alphabet.
Obviously, I chose the letter I, avoiding it until the final phrase. The poem doesn't include J, Q, or X, either, but high-scoring Scrabble tiles don't really count in Lipogram Land.
This week's Poetry Friday round-up is at Adventures in Daily Living!


Good job! Very clever how you went from the missing letters in the title to reclaiming them in the last line.
Thank you! I do like it when my cleverness goes observed. ;-)
Lisa, this is really terrific! Was it horribly difficult to write without 'I'? And rhyming too! I'm so impressed!
I think we should make up a poetry form that ONLY uses high-scoring Scrabble tiles.
Thanks, Jennifer! At the time it didn't seem *too* hard to find I-less words, but when I proofread it afterward, I found a bunch of I-words had slipped in anyway! My eyes skipped over the I's...
Regarding the high-scoring Scrabble tiles... do I hear the clank of a gauntlet being thrown down? ;-)
C-L-A-N-K
Let's see, by my reckoning, "clank" is a 11 point word in Scrabble... :-)
No promises, but I'll give it a try if you will!
Ooh - clever. Love the title, and how you make clear what's missing (in more ways than one)!
Thank you, Kelly!
If I was artistic I'd design a Cleverest Blogging Poet's Award....but I'm not, so you'll have to settle for the sentement in this comment. GREAT JOB LISA!!!
Thanks, Jim, you're too sweet!
Often when I see these prompts for poetry, i avoid them, thinking "tch, gimmicky". But I loved your poem, the vehicle and the communication.
Thank you!
I think that poetry prompts, like any other kinds of prompts, are what you make of them. If it weren't for the prompts, I probably wouldn't be writing poems at all. So I like 'em for that. Plus the specificity of the challenges helps me focus. I need focus to write a poem.
Seriously awesome poem. Nice job!
Thanks, Rebecca!