Poetry Friday: Snowbound

After weeks of avoidance, I finally tackled the sestina which, Stephen Fry says, "is a bitch to explain but a joy to make." (This kind of commentary is why I love The Ode Less Travelled.)

I feel like I'm jumping the gun with the snow poetry, seeing as Chicago's only seen a light dusting that melted within a day, but snow's definitely on folks' minds. And I'm generally weather-obsessed. And to get "meta" for a moment, the sestina's strict form seems quietly oppressive—sort of like being snowed in.

Without further ado...
 

Snowbound

It’s January, and my family falls
asleep to storm warnings, drifts
through warm dreams, our blankets
shielding us a little longer. Still,
morning brings the truth. Close
to seventeen inches has stuck

to the streets, leaving us all stuck
at home. All day the snow falls.
We sigh and layer on warm clothes,
as snow gathers at the door in drifts.
The world outside is hushed and still,
draped in soft crystal blankets.

The news station issues a blanket
statement: all city plows stuck
plowing “important” roads. Still,
we hope. We visualize waterfalls,
rapids, hurricanes—anything but drifts
of powdered water, heavy and close.

When bedtime comes, I don’t close
the curtains. Wrapped in wool blankets,
I drowsily watch as each flake drifts
downward. I dream that I’m stuck
in a plastic snowglobe, trapped in its false
blizzard forever. When I wake, it’s still

snowing. Life is at a standstill,
every school and church closed.
Under the snow’s weight, a pine falls
across the road. New snow blankets
it, the clouds permanently stuck
on “high,” and once again the drifts

rise. I’m past bored. My mind drifts,
wondering if there’s a lesson to distill
from these days of confinement—stuck
with no one but family, in such close
quarters. No. My mind is blank. It’s
muffled more with every flake that falls.

Then night falls again on our snowy, still
world, and we all drift together, cuddling close,
blanket to blanket—for a moment content to be stuck.
 

Stephen Fry also writes of the sestina, "You can do it, believe me you can. And you will be so proud of yourself!" I grudgingly suppose he's right.

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Comments

Nice. I especially like the plastic snow globe stanza. You've actually made me look forward to January.

Thanks, Pat. I think I cheated on the snow globe line, though; I totally ripped it off my novel. Is it possible to plagiarize oneself?

Wow, is that cool (and I don't mean because it's about snow). There are times in the hustle and bustle of our busy lives I think we need to be "stuck". I think you truly captured that fact in the end and that we would be bored on the way to the realization.

Love it, love it, love it!!!

Thanks, Jim! I agree, it's so valuable to slow down once in a while, and sometimes it takes an act of nature to get us to do that.

Oh, I love it! I won't ask you to explain it, but I hope it wasn't too hard to write. For someone who doesn't live with snow and has only seen it twice, in person, your poem was very vivid for me. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks, Shelly! I'm glad the snow came through for you. Hard for me to imagine a life without it, the good and bad of it alike.

Well done, Lisa - that's not easy. I especially love the way "blankets" morphs into "blank. It's" - that is clever! Ditto "distill." Do you know the sestina page over at McSweeney's? If not, I bet you would love to see it. Here's the link: http://www.mcsweeneys.net/links/sestinas/

Thank you, Julie! I hadn't seen the McSweeney's sestina page before. How great! I may come to love the sestina yet; certainly, my appreciation for it is steadily growing. :-)

You are proud of yourself, though, aren't you?
A group of us worked on a crown of sonnets a while ago, and now are embarking on a sestina -- reading yours is encouraging.

Oh, I remember reading the crown of sonnets when you all posted it originally! Very impressive. I look forward to reading the group sestina!