Poetry Friday: Hobgoblins

Six weeks ago, I fell off the Ode Less Travelled wagon, all because of the stupid villanelle exercise. I tried to write one about the equinox, and it was just a misery.

Never one to shy from making the same mistake twice, however, I decided to try again. I meant to write a Halloween poem, but it turned into more of a villanelle for all seasons.
 

Hobgoblins

They come while you’re sleeping,
in the loneliest hour of night—
teeth gleaming, shadows creeping.

From cobweb corners peeping,
itching to claw, hungry to bite,
they come while you’re sleeping,

through your dreams slowly seeping.
They scratch deep within, white
teeth gleaming, shadows creeping

to the soft place you’re keeping
your hopes, hidden, bright.
But they come while you’re sleeping,

so you can’t stop their reaping.
Fearful, frozen, you can’t fight
the teeth gleaming, shadows creeping.

Left naked, raw, weeping,
you can’t sleep again. They might
come back while you’re sleeping—
teeth gleaming, shadows creeping.
 

poetry_friday_button-2.jpgWell, that was cheerful! Happy Halloween, everyone! Thanks for visiting the haunted house inside my brain!

This week's Poetry Friday round-up is hosted by Poetry for Children.

Comments

Creeeeepy! I've got a lot to get done tonight, but now I don't have to worry about when I get to bed -- I just need to read Hobgoblins again and I won't want to.

Jim

Hee! Always glad to be of service, Jim.

I love it! I am in awe of original poems as I try my hand at them from time to time. I like the way the two lines in the poem repeat, not always exactly the same, but repeating none the less. Great poem!

Thanks so much, Shelly! Original poems put me in awe, too. It's so freakin' hard to write one!

Wow! Those words and images will stay with me for a long time. Thanks for sharing. Happy Halloween!

Thanks, Fiddler! Happy Halloween to you, too!

Kudos to you for tackling an original poem! Love it! Thanks for participating in Poetry Friday at PoetryforChildren this Halloween! Stop by any time...
Sylvia

Thanks, Sylvia!