Poetry Friday: Pink Summer
A few months back, Tricia at The Miss Rumphius Effect posted a suggestion to write "colorful" poetry based on Hailstones and Halibut Bones, by Mary O'Neill. I remembered that my own third grade teacher used that very book with us way back when, and I'd written several four-line verses on different colors. But I didn't step up to the challenge until this week, when I used O'Neill's book as part of my junior literary magazine's opening exercise. If I was asking them to write a colorful poem, shouldn't I do it, too?
So, here's the first non-doggerel poem I've written in... I have no idea how long... five hundred years? It's a rather sentimental ode on summer and the color pink. You have been warned. (Thanks to Jim Danielson for the encouragement last week. Jim, for the record, this took me considerably longer than 15 minutes.)
PINK SUMMER
Dawn smears pink fingers across the dark lake.
Fifty mosquito bites itch you awake.
The day is a strawberry, poised at your lips,
a wheel of melon without any pips.
Out to pick raspberries in the cool morn,
your legs tic-tac-toed by each saber-tooth thorn.
Now run to the beach, let the sun bake you sore.
Gobble a hotdog, then gobble two more.
A peppermint ice cream cone stickies your face
as pink sun melts away and pink moon takes its place.
Catch this week's Poetry Friday round-up at The Well-Read Child!


Wonderful poem, Lisa. I love "the day is a strawberry . . ."
Thanks, Jama!
I love all of your various shades of summer pink! Delightful!
Thanks, Mary Lee!
I like how you've contrasted the positive pinks with the hurtful ones like mosquitoes, thorns and sunburn. good job!
Thanks!! You know, I don't even think that was conscious-- they all just seemed like par for the course on a summer day. Go me?
Lisa,
Your poem is delightful!
I love the line "your legs tic-tac-toed by each saber-tooth thorn" (though I don't wish to experience it!)
I had no contribution to Poetry Friday this week as I was in a multiple day kitchen project -- for the record it is painted two shades of tan/brown, not "Pink Summer"
Jim Danielson
Thank you, Jim! I've heard about those multi-day kitchen projects-- something about them being waaaaay more stressful and time-consuming than Poetry Friday? But it sounds like the project was a success!